Jawnsunn's WIP-fest

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I don't read the scarf as blowing in the wind, just as a wobbling line.

Why's this?
I think I might know why: the movement in the scarf is broken, which gives me the impression it's choppy. It's not just a question of making an oscillation that you flip vertically in the next frame: you have to remember that the wind makes a thin fabric swell, and this swell travels through its entirety.
I'm also skeptical as to whether the wind can lift such a narrow and rope-like scarf. I think you could also reveal the other end of the scarf, too.

Looking forward to progress!

[Gors]

here's a (basic) example of how fabrics are blown in the wind:



notice that it doesn't just wave around: it 'whips' itself every given time. try representing it in your animation.

[Garamonde]

I see! That's really interesting. I'll try to keep this stuff in mind.
Now I feel even more inspired to start something! Thanks for showing me that stuff guys. C:

[Jawnsunn]

Yo.

(WIP)
SLIDE! SLIDE!


I've been trying to redo the afro since I feel like it doesn't work with me anymore. Would like some feed back on the new hair.


Hitsparks, because you can never kick ass without them.

Regarding the scarf:
It wasn't suppose to be very thin as the line I was using was meant to be made a guideline for a much more wider scarf.

[Crappy Blue Luigi]

the new afro is super slick.

i love everything you do.

[LegostormJ]

The legitness of this is over 9000.
I love all of it.
Keep working on it.
To infinity.
This is a win.

[Star]

The new afro definitely brings out the style of your character and as well as his exaggerated..ness.

I seriously can't wait to see all of this fully animated HNGGGHHH
I am proud of you..










son. plot twist

[Jawnsunn]

I haven't had time to pixel or anything because of school, tests, and other shit, but I whipped up something today.

THE 4th ATTEMPT AT AN IDLE ANIMATION!
Someone on Pixel Joint critique on the last idle that most fighters had their hands up and mine had a bad pose.
I finally addressed the issue and I'm happy about it. He looks like top tier beat-em-up material.
oh and a rough mockup of the first stage of my game.

i need to improve my background work big time, because I'm bad at it.

[Mashuga]

Your character blends too heavily into the background in the screenshot.

[Star]

Perhaps you could have colorful-graffiti like stuff for the background? That way the character doesn't blend in so much with it. I couldn't imagine the background being any darker.

[Jawnsunn]

Kind of had an idea of an action rpg platformer game.

Not sure if it is asskicking material or not.

[Gors]

idk what's going on with his face, also the shading makes it look like it's a two-tone vest


prove me this is asskicking material.