More or less finished

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

What do you think?

[Gwen]

I like that a lot! Looks to be coming along very nicely.

[Sengir]

Wow, that fusion of styles worked surprisingly well!

[Lexou Duck]

Outline's lookin' good !

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

[Cobalt Blue]

i believe we're heading in the right direction this time. might shorten the neck a bit so it wouldn't look longer than it should, and make those shoulders and chest wider so it would be more proportional to the arms.

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Still prefer number 1. Thank the post if you prefer number 2.
(thanks met and co.)

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

OK

[Adam]

I honestly prefer the bare arms rather than the newest ones. They complicate the visual interest and make it less readable, at least in my opinion.

Good work, though!

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Yeah I really wanted the hair on, even if I was aware of the readability issue (especially of his right arm)
Anybody got a compromise, apart from leaving the hair on his left arm and leaving his right arm hairless? I guess I could change his arm, but that might change the feel of the sprite completely...

[Gors]

What if you made the hair dark green? This way you could keep the hair and avoid readability issues imo

[Cobalt Blue]

that was what i was about to say.

also about the chest i had something in mind like the big guy from the advance wars

[Sengir]

I thought the arm hair was a reference to the Chris2Bears sprite?

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

You're quite right Sengir, that's what I had in mind. :/

I didn't understand what you meant Metaru, but that sheet will come in handy for the comp, thanks!
Should I try blending the black and green for the hair?

[Cshad]

The chest looks awful horizontal for someone who looks as though he's bending forward; try puffing it out more at an angle, as shown in the advance war character sheet.