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Need critique for sprite
#16
Oh, the one on the left isn't the same as the one that I fixed. Sorry!
For the one on the right, where could I add more AA?
[Image: Viperforsig3.png]How 'bout this?
#17
Now, skull! [Image: Skullforsig12.png](the one in purple)

Also, I know there are two of the person in blue. One is a different form. The one with the halo should be floating.
#18
I know I'm posting a lot, but I need critique before I can move on.
[Image: arcoforsig1.png]
#19
Hey, that's Reborn.
Never got past the first chapter, but I've seen that blue guy before and it looks pretty good.
#20
Oh, you know!
You should continue. It's really good. Are the actual sprites okay?
#21
From knowing nothing about what happens after chapter 1 (though I've heard it gets more violent later in the series) I don't know who those characters are. But from a spriting perspective, they look good.
#22
Not too violent, really no one dies in the series, and really only blood in the beginning.
On topic: I'm going to maybe start others soon.
#23
Eh. I wouldn't say there's no blood in Reborn, but there's limited amount compared to some others. Either way, good series. Sprites look good, btw.
#24
I added some back poses for the first four

[Image: Franspritee.png]
also do you think I fixed the face on the one with yellow hair?
#25
It's ALOT better. Nice sprites, btw.
#26
thank you. Eyes don't look odd to you? They were really bothering me
#27
I think it may be the outlining that's bothering you. Other than that, nothing wrong that I see.


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