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#1
07-02-2009, 09:19 AM
here's a small WIP gif :V

I'm stuck here without knowing what i could add to that huge emty area below ness. Any ideas?(ignore the current backpack.
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The Dark green is meant to be Transparent.
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07-02-2009, 10:15 AM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2009, 10:16 AM by King of Bad Posters.)
Really cool, can't wait for the finish, it's WIP so no crits.
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#3
07-02-2009, 03:27 PM
Yeah, no real crits to be made yet. But I love you fffffff.

The scout's head doesn't look very scouty, unless that's how you meant it to be.
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#4
07-02-2009, 03:48 PM
I love it. You should add Bonk Energy Drink Cans or the Intel or something.
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#5
07-02-2009, 06:00 PM
the intel seems a great idea indeed. as for the borders of the ground, I'm going to do the same thing Jar jar did for his mini RPG mockup.
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07-02-2009, 07:27 PM
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#7
07-02-2009, 08:26 PM
The brim of the cap might be a bit too long.
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07-02-2009, 09:40 PM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2009, 09:45 PM by Cobalt Blue.)
fixed the cap, added more details, stole jarjar's flowers
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just noticed the Suitcase could use more contrast and a shadow.
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07-03-2009, 11:24 AM (This post was last modified: 07-03-2009, 11:24 AM by Cobalt Blue.)
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well this could be the final version, but can i request some feedback? you know, i'm not posting this shit just to "display" it.
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#10
07-03-2009, 12:13 PM
The tree looks rather flat, maybe add another shade? Othewise, looks finished to me.
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#11
07-03-2009, 12:26 PM
That hand and arm with the bat looks fucking odd - any way you could make it look more natural?
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07-03-2009, 01:20 PM (This post was last modified: 07-03-2009, 01:24 PM by Cobalt Blue.)
i think its related to the way the arm is drawn... it has no forearm(despite the perspective i tried to give it.
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shortened the arm, gave it an elbow, and i made the tree flat on purpose, since i want to focus everything on the two characters.
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#13
07-03-2009, 01:57 PM
This is going to sound really fucking picky but.... Add one more pixel of black to the bottom of the elbow to make the cure less square...

edit: and take a couple off the top of the elbow bit, to make the curve less 1/1 and more 1/2... I can't explain what I mean.
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07-03-2009, 03:30 PM
but i get what you mean. and please, the more picky you are, the better stuff gets fixed. every single detail counts.
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made the elbow more round
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#15
07-03-2009, 05:24 PM
but, but the tree still looks halfassed, jk
the paper looks kinda out of place but that may just be me

nice job so far, things look pretty finished.
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