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Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl

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Platinum, Diamond, and Pearl
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#1
07-01-2009, 09:53 PM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2009, 12:26 PM by JarJar.)
[Image: dpp.gif]

Yes Platinum is Dawn's manga name.

Anyway I completed all 3, thanks to those who helped on Pearl. More comments would be nice before I submit these on art sites.
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#2
07-01-2009, 09:58 PM
That is great, do you plan on making a Dia/Lucas to match?
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07-01-2009, 10:00 PM (This post was last modified: 07-01-2009, 10:00 PM by JarJar.)
Yes I do, I actually started him before pearl but I decided to finish pearl instead.
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#4
07-01-2009, 10:02 PM
Looks amazing Jar, as usual. I always did like your styles, they're simple and clean. This one style is one of my favs.
Honestly, I don't think there is anything needed to be improved. I was gonna say his neck shouldn't be covered as much but since it looks like he is leaning forward a bit while walking, it's acceptable to have it covered.
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07-01-2009, 10:11 PM
Alright thanks, I guess I'll just move on and finish Diamond.
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07-01-2009, 10:29 PM (This post was last modified: 07-01-2009, 10:30 PM by JoshR691.)
Looks pretty great, the only thing I see 'wrong' with him is his left cheek seems too chubby, but that might just be part of the Style...
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07-01-2009, 10:40 PM
edited because the dark spot i put there to prevent that wasnt dark enough
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07-01-2009, 11:08 PM
Looks better! Can't wait for Dia/Lucas
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#9
07-02-2009, 02:28 AM
[Image: dpp.gif]

added lucas, edited dawn and barry too.
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07-02-2009, 02:45 AM
Looks great, nice work.
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07-02-2009, 03:43 AM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2009, 03:44 AM by JoshR691.)
I can't quite put my finger on it, but I think Lucas' Left arm (Our Right) is positioned a little awkwardly... Maybe try to angle it forward a little more...

Other than that, they're great!
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07-02-2009, 04:17 AM (This post was last modified: 07-02-2009, 04:19 AM by JarJar.)
I had a strong feeling the arm was off because it was bothering me a bit still, but then I took a good long look at the artwork and figured a solution:
[Image: dppz.gif]
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07-02-2009, 07:39 AM
[Image: 1245985597293.jpg]

Seriously though these are really nice.
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#14
07-02-2009, 09:02 AM
Those eyes are really creepy, especially Pearl's.

I wouldn't expect them to all have the same eye-shape, either.
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#15
07-02-2009, 12:25 PM
[Image: dpp.gif]

edited their eyes, and the shape of each is slightly different to match each one's expression better, and added more color and shading in them.

anything else or am i done?
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