Here. An edit of Peach from MaL3 making her into the Shadow Queen from Paper Mario.
Only the Shadow Queen in Peach's body. I might do another edit of the Shadow Queen's spirit later.
5. USE AN IMAGE HOSTING SITE.
Jesus Christ, would it kill you guys to upload your sprites there and post them here? Attachments are incredibly annoying, especially when I have to download the sprite only for it to end up being a shitty recolor. Not only that but it makes the poster look like an amateur. All you have to do is make an account, upload the image, and paste the link here. Make sure you put it between [.IMG] [/IMG] (without the period)
It's a meh-ish recolor but good for a starter. I've seen terrible stuff with some beginners. What you're basicly missing is the important details of Shadow Peach.
There should be a diamond shape in the middle, the shoulder parts of her dress should extend out, her crown needs to be pointy, the back part of her dress that is behind her head should be fixed up alot, and her eyes shouldn't be red. You also need to have her have a purple type of color to her dress, not black.
Compare this to your sprite and you'll see that there are alot of errors in the design of yours.
05-25-2009, 07:04 PM (This post was last modified: 05-25-2009, 07:50 PM by LordGavin.)
Just a quick note: The Shadow Queen's eye actually are red. BUT, only when she uses her lightning attack. (Check game footage, it's true).
I just thought they looked more evil then her black eyes.
I'm currently making up another look re-design, so hold off on the comments until I finish. (shouldn't be long).
Alright, here it is. Re-designed to the to be as exact to the picture as I can make it now. (Yes, just a concept and not the entire sheet).
I pointed her shoulders, re-coloured her dress and darkened the right parts (as in the picture), adjusted her skin colour, adjusted her eye colour, gave her eye-shadow, pointed her crown, high-lighted with white part of her dress, and did the best job I can with her cape (I really don't know how much better I could do it given what I had [If anyone can tell, the cape is an edit of Dark Fawful's cape]).
It's a little better, but the cape still needs work, mostly the top part of it. You should try using lighter colours for the clothes too, they seem much darker than in the official design.