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Custom Baby Yoshi

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Nice sprite, you should make a sheet!
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Meh....could be better. ( explain below)
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Custom Baby Yoshi
Clear_Midnight Offline
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#1
03-25-2009, 10:09 PM
Whew....my first custom, what do you think of it, should I make a sheet?

[Image: BabyYoshi.png]
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Snuka7 (Dark Lord) Offline
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#2
03-26-2009, 01:40 AM
This is in the wrong section buddy. This is for whole Projects and not a Sheet. It actally looks pretty cool, but looks a bit weird considering he has a white stomach on a semi-white background of the Forums. But the Shading isn't too bad. Just try get the shape of the body a bit more round, or bolder, I guess...
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#3
03-26-2009, 01:11 PM
NOT A PROJECT

To Sprite Discussion it goes.
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03-26-2009, 02:04 PM (This post was last modified: 03-26-2009, 02:10 PM by Vipershark.)
put it on a dark background and it'll look better

the head looks okay, but the body looks odd.
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03-26-2009, 03:01 PM
Head looks too much like normal yoshi, feet are weird, the arms shading is messed up and it should be darker.
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03-26-2009, 04:44 PM (This post was last modified: 03-26-2009, 05:16 PM by Clear_Midnight.)
With black:
[Image: By.png]
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Vipershark Offline
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#7
03-26-2009, 05:18 PM
tbqh it looks like you took a regular yoshi's head and made a terible body for it
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03-26-2009, 05:44 PM
its supposed to be chibi style!
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03-26-2009, 08:39 PM
Well if it's chibi, you might want to give it a bigger head.
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03-27-2009, 05:59 AM
Also, you would make the eyes black with white shines if it was chibi
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#11
03-27-2009, 06:36 AM
I think it looks good, but the nose should be a perfect circle even in the bottom left corner. Body might look better if just a little fatter, shoes look kinda light in colour.

Also, a bigger remake would be nice. You're allowed more room for details with bigger sprites so you could make it a lot better.
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03-30-2009, 07:05 PM
(03-27-2009, 06:36 AM)Neslug Wrote: I think it looks good, but the nose should be a perfect circle even in the bottom left corner. Body might look better if just a little fatter, shoes look kinda light in colour.

Also, a bigger remake would be nice. You're allowed more room for details with bigger sprites so you could make it a lot better.

I'll try it, thanks
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#13
03-30-2009, 07:52 PM
One sprite is hard to make inferences on your spriting ability. Make some other basic poses to show us so we can give you some better C+C
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03-30-2009, 08:14 PM
(03-30-2009, 07:52 PM)Azure Fox Wrote: One sprite is hard to make inferences on your spriting ability. Make some other basic poses to show us so we can give you some better C+C

Ok, I will Smile
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#15
03-30-2009, 08:15 PM
I think it's a great sprite. But one good sprite is only worthy of an avatar, if I were you I'd make a sheet. Wink
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