Larxene

[Cesar]

Ok, I made this Larxene from Kingdom Hearts: Chain of Memories.


C+C, please A_A

[Goemar]

Back of his/her (why can't Square characters have real genders?) skirt/coat is rather jaggy.
Feet look a bit odd to.

[Cesar]

It's a she xD
I think the part you say that is jaggy is what supposed to be her hood. Guess it didn't work out very nicely.

And I was never really good with feet anyway, but I'll try to fix it.

[GrooveMan.exe]

The hood seems to be too small to see from the front when not worn, so I wouldn't worry about representing it. I think her hair is a bit too saturated - she's more 'platinum' than that.

[Cesar]

I didn't quite understand that
What's saturated?

[Sol]

I didn't quite understand that
What's saturated?

Her hair, he meant it's too yellow.

[Cesar]

Ohh, got it.
- >
Here it is. Took out the hood, changed the hair's color and changed the feet. =)

[GrooveMan.exe]

Much better, although her old left foot (the one pointing outwards) is better than the old one. It's a minor thing though.

[Kenjitake]

yes larxene is a "she"...
it's not very major, but to me the coat near her legs looks kinda off... idk, if you just look at it it just looks off. what I can see though is it does need some smoothing out down there, and thats about it.

[Cesar]

Ok... What exactly looks strange about it? @_@

[Kenjitake]

maybe my eyes are getting bad... it looks a little bit baggy/ big, there we go. and it needs to be smoothed out, then there ya have it!

[Cesar]

Like this?

[Kenjitake]

yeah... there we go. now, smooth out her right leg (leg facing us) and it will be perfect.

[Cesar]

But smooth her right leg, where, exactly?

[Kenjitake]

this edge: