[spoiler]Okay, so after looking at the sprites and such I changed mine to be absolutely symetrical from every side, and then realized you mean more circular and all that so I changed it to be that too, and then it was similar to your green underlined one (except that your green underlined one isn't symetrical)
[spoiler]And, uh I couldn't help but notice that you made your original kirby with the circle tool.

We all know that the circle tool doesn't make good circles[/spoiler] [/spoiler]
But really all I care about is that you move his cheeks. Seriously google image kirby and not a single one of the pictures will have his cheeks under his eyes like that, they are all of to the side. Like I said, they just look like bags under his eyes where you put them.
(Okay I lied, upon closer inspection the cover art of Crystal Shards has them sorta where you do, but every other picture has them where I do.)
So yes, fix the cheeks and I can sod off (and maybe find a nice inbetween of our arms)