06-27-2012, 05:01 PM
![[Image: 2na8o.png]](http://i.imgur.com/2na8o.png)
C+C? I'm most likely not going to change it (but I might), I'd just another pair of eyes to see what's wrong, so I don't make the same mistakes in the future.
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06-27-2012, 05:01 PM
![]() C+C? I'm most likely not going to change it (but I might), I'd just another pair of eyes to see what's wrong, so I don't make the same mistakes in the future.
06-27-2012, 05:09 PM
Her left hand (our right) looks a bit funky. Try and keep the widths consistent.
06-27-2012, 06:16 PM
It looks like that because it's the Shadow Queen, she is going to have odd proportions.
06-27-2012, 06:23 PM
The only criticism I have is that I don't think the dithering works on the hand that's closest to us. I love the way you implemented it around her face -- it gives a nice, dark feeling that the character demands. But you've purposefully made the hand to look sort of flat on the top and I don't think the dither suits the effect you're going for.
Also when I first look at the piece, the dithering on the hand is what first catches my attention, which shouldn't be. Beautiful, excellent work, though!
06-27-2012, 06:43 PM
looks like too much dithering
06-29-2012, 05:13 PM
I enjoy the dithering. It gives it a rather retro vibe, and it works with how it's on the near-transparent part of her body. I also love the perspective. Her fingers look very uneven in width on her left (our right) hand, however.
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