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Something I'm working on for a Super Robot Wars fangame, SRW Eternity.
![[Image: 7Qa2X.png]](http://i.imgur.com/7Qa2X.png)
Any C+C you could possibly give me would be nice. I don't think that shoulder and arm are looking too good...
And just to note, the work isn't 100% my own. Basically one person makes a 3D model, another guy traces that (those rough grey bits you see there), and I refine those and fill in the details.
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Add more contrast to help the metallic effect. Especially make the highlights brighter. And addambient lighting. Make it shiny :-D
Reminds me of Cutman :-P
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Boy I sure do love being lazy as hell.
![[Image: ny0UV.png]](http://i.imgur.com/ny0UV.png)
Also,
![[Image: zakki_by_domobot-d524m8q.gif]](http://fc06.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/154/2/1/zakki_by_domobot-d524m8q.gif)
If anyone wants to point out anything horrible, that'd be nice.
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Female Buzz Lightyear? Looks cute!
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You're not the first to say that. Maybe I should go for some different colors...
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06-04-2012, 07:51 PM
(This post was last modified: 06-04-2012, 07:52 PM by Thumbtacks.)
Nothing horrible, no sir.
Although there's quite a few jagged lines on the robot, its better to smooth them out properly before you shade it.
And for the girl, the left leg seems a bit bent odd, and the eyes are soul-piercing.
Try giving her some eyelids.
(06-04-2012, 07:44 PM)Sengi~ Wrote: Female Buzz Lightyear? Looks cute!
I didn't even notice that
Can't unsee/
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Could be her color pattern. (both characters have their colors patterned layout identically) and the fact both are fliers and might share a similar concept.
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i thought he was going to be huge lol
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It's a little weird that his arms don't have joints...
I'm having trouble seeing it do anything with them without looking silly
