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[WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work)

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[WIP] Mr. Saturn (Needs Work)
PJAMA Offline
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#1
10-04-2010, 08:48 PM
Meh, I don't think they're ready yet.

[Image: mrsaturn1.png]

Comments on how to make it better?
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#2
10-04-2010, 09:02 PM
(The Credit/Info tag is literally larger than the sprites.)
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#3
10-04-2010, 09:21 PM
you dont need to add such a huge label to remark that it is a work in progress.

but as far as criticism goes, you need to shade these properly. even when saturns are literally a ball with a huge nose, pillowshading them its not teh way to go.
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#4
10-05-2010, 11:16 AM
the colours seem very dull and should be peach-ier
he is missing his eyebrows which are essential for portraying his character
the line-art for his nose is not very good. it should be more circular
the feet should be more rounded, they currently look too sharp

fix these things and you'll be good to go!
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