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Hello.
There's only about 6 pokemon whom still need to be sprited, and I feel that this amazing project should be completed so I've decided to help.
I gave Nidorino a shot. The tutorial is broken so I hope I did the anti aliasing correctly. It's the one top left.
Based upon this image.
Criticism please.
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07-20-2010, 07:04 AM
(This post was last modified: 07-20-2010, 07:07 AM by Hoeloe.)
It looks like you traced over it and flipped it. Don't do that. Also, the shading makes it look very flat.
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07-20-2010, 03:04 PM
(This post was last modified: 07-20-2010, 03:06 PM by BBmolla.)
Define "traced it over". I sprited it while looking at the reference, but I didn't actually draw over it or anything. If it's an issue I can change the pose.
I'll see what I can do with the shading.
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07-20-2010, 03:46 PM
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(07-20-2010, 03:04 PM)BBmolla Wrote: Define "traced it over". I sprited it while looking at the reference, but I didn't actually draw over it or anything. If it's an issue I can change the pose.
I'll see what I can do with the shading.
The pose of the new one looks a little too much like its predecessor.
Also I want to help but I can't see the cute dispute.
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@BBmolla: Six? lol there's more than six that haven't even been touched, plus a good chunk of what we have needs heavy editing. We are pretty close though, glad you're willing to give your support.
I like Nidorino's pose but he's too fat, his face is too round, his legs look small and disjointed. It seems like you get the style but the line art needs a lot of work.
(07-20-2010, 03:46 PM)Silverdabolt Wrote: Also I want to help but I can't see the cute dispute. It wasn't that important, basically just said to avoid generic poses. it made suggestions like creating a pose that reflects the Pokemon's attitude in the anime or something. it went on to say to make an nice pose (or at least a nice angle), but retain accuracy. I don't have it anymore and can't be bothered to remake it.
Update.
-did Venomoth
-edited haunter and ghastl slightly
-edited Weepinbell
-i still don't see what you mean about charmeleon Hoeloe but I tried redoing the head, let me know if it works better
I'm going to try working on Abra soon.
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07-23-2010, 04:04 AM
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Charmeleon looks much better now. Weepinbells eyes look a little flat, perhaps the outline is causing that? Some selout or more AA needed maybe?
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Small update.
-redrew exeggcute
-edited Omanyte
-tried fixing Weepinbell
-tried editing Jolteon... don't really like it though. I think he needs to be completely redone
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Weepinbell looks better now.
I'd suggest thickening the base of Pidgey's wings, as it, thicken the side closer to it's body.
As for Jolteon, I think the main issue is with the AA.
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Another small update. I made Kingler and a new Krabby and cleaned up oddish a little.
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08-02-2010, 09:48 AM
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Small update. Moving slowly, but surely!
There's about ~25ish Pokemon I still want to edit and about 15 pokemon that are untouched. So we are getting pretty close
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Wowo, Its been ages since I last Checked in on this Project, Starting to look really Epic, Will it be turned into an actual game?
If you would like any help drop me a pm :')
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08-03-2010, 08:54 AM
(This post was last modified: 08-03-2010, 12:53 PM by Hoeloe.)
Made a bit of an edit to Pidgey, since I didn't think it looked right. See if it's better.
Also did the same thing to Magneton. It looked horribly overshaded and over AAd.
EDIT: Had a quick crack at Nidorina. Defo needs work, but I thought I'd get some input first. I'm pretty sure the head needs to be bigger.
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Wow Pidgey looks indefinitely better. It's not perfect though. The feathers still need to be rounded out, or maybe bigger and fewer.
Magneton looks better but I still want to do some touch ups myself.
Nidorina is pretty over shaded and deformed.
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(08-04-2010, 05:44 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: Wow Pidgey looks indefinitely better. It's not perfect though. The feathers still need to be rounded out, or maybe bigger and fewer.
Fair enough.
(08-04-2010, 05:44 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: Magneton looks better but I still want to do some touch ups myself.
I expected you to anyway.
(08-04-2010, 05:44 PM)X Gamer 66 Wrote: Nidorina is pretty over shaded and deformed.
Taking another look, I'd say she needs a bigger head, thicker arms and thicker legs. I'll get on that.
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Uploaded with ImageShack.usI tried to remake Nidorina for you but..I'm just too tired right now. ME SLEEP NOW
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