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The readability could be a little better and he lacks a chin.
In other news I need to try giving my advice in text form rather than editing the sprite myself. But this is just to better illustrate my point, not discourage you from further working on yours.
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07-02-2010, 12:01 PM
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You did'nt discourage me at all, you just made me want to make my sprite better.
EDIT: Edited it and used yours as a reference hope it doesnt look too much like yours.
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Mine is on the left side.
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it looks really good, but the black lines under the shoe are kinda bugging me, but no biggie
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The left arm (your left) bothers me.
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![[Image: custommarioj.png]](http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/9623/custommarioj.png)
Better?
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I little, yeah I guess its better then before.
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It has to be perfect.
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not quite, make the arms shorter.
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maybe shorten the arm a little? it seems rather long
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Gorsal already said that you know.
And I think he is a bit too fat.
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Just a question, are we back where we started?
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it looks a lot better now
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The arms look better now, but he looks like he is holding his air to not look fat.
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07-02-2010, 02:22 PM
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![[Image: idle1.png]](http://img69.imageshack.us/img69/3440/idle1.png)
Hes beggining to look like his brother.
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thread!
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hmm, Maybe give him a little more chub
