A Captain & A Blockified Counterpart

[Ninspriterx]

I expect to make a little animation for both of them.

For Olimar I want to do a battle stance + plucking each color pikmin and throwing em'. Before that I need help with his hair, and helmet, and what ever else is there.

[Koreo the Fox]

the hair looks like a wierd mohock, each hair should have it's own room, and the light at the end of the helmet looks like somthing from Yoshi island, otherwise, it's good

[Ninspriterx]

Thanks man :] I'll be sure to work at that.

a wittle update:

[Jovian-12]

daww, wookit the little pikmin. however...it looks really square. I know you have limited space because it's so tiny, but try making its head look rounder? possibly the body too.

[Koreo the Fox]

Thanks man :] I'll be sure to work at that.

a wittle update:

thats alot better, I can't see anything wrong with it now

[Ninspriterx]

Alrighty, polished up the Pikmin and finished up Olimar.


Any comments before I start animating?

[Tea]

the helmet looks like its behind olimars head rather than on it.

[Jovian-12]

perhaps the leaf could be bigger? they're usually as big as the pikmin's head.

[Ninspriterx]

the helmet looks like its behind olimars head rather than on it.

I noticed that but I have not the slightest clue on how to approach it :/

[Cytric Acid]

the helmet looks like its behind olimars head rather than on it.

I noticed that but I have not the slightest clue on how to approach it :/

try adding a highlight on his face, crossing into the helmet?

[Vic]

You could try to enlarge/move the shine on his helmet so it's in front of his head.
Or you could make the skincolor less saturated or a bit darker...
Or whatever I don't even know.


pretty much what I said :c

[Chaoxys]

For the Memory Waluigi, I think the arm on the far side should be placed higher the closer arm.

[Ninspriterx]

Ummmm...

[Neslug]

That's a great start, just add more frames to make it smoother. As for Waluigi, remove the antialiasing under the arms, they detract from the blocky look.

[Vic]

He doesn't need more frames, it's just the frame timing that needs to be adjusted.