Our cousin and Jorge (Halo Reach)

[Wes]

Those huge bars coming out of his jaw going straight into his shoulders, is tht supposed to be his neck? It looks out of place. I know it's supposed to be stylized, bit it's much to angular to fit witht he rest of the picture.

[Baegal]

his neck and shoulders should also have more shine on them to even out the piece

[Cobalt Blue]

knowing his workflow, he hasn't shaded these yet. the only stuff in that image thats close to be complete are the face features.

[Gors]

Don't worry, that's just so I've got a grid. After that I'll gradient it like the hair, but I think I may change the colour of the chest grid ( his hair to be ).

That's a relief c:

and I think those bars are supposed to be those hard stuff we have on the neck. But I think it needs to be less angular, as Wes said.

[Cshad]

It looks sorta like a neanderthol robot
sweeeet

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

I'll see in due time about the neck, the shine I'll leave only for the face (for now).
And here's another WIP, Jorge from Halo Reach:

[Cshad]

Although that is really cool
He looks really stiff, like there isn't a body underneath. Just a conglomerate of...parts.

[Cobalt Blue]

for some reason, that really reminded me cyrax from mortal kombat

[Chris2Balls [:B]]

Although that is really cool
He looks really stiff, like there isn't a body underneath. Just a conglomerate of...parts.

I think this may be due to my work pattern, i work in parts, but I'll see if I can fix this by adding a gap between the arm on left and torso and starting on the legs.
Ha, yeah he does actually, Metaru! Must be the yellow chestplate.

[Marth]

I'm not to sure I like that neck, I mean the muscles are all distorted in it, I'm not really sure sterno-cleano-mastoids(spelling here is probabbly 100% wrong) even work that way. Still stylish as hell and the colors are rather attractive, can't wait to see it done.