Paper Jam Boy

[[robo9]]

My personal favorite character from Pearls Before Swine. I do need to add a tail and cape C+C?

[Sengir]

The facial expression could be a bit closer to the ref.

[[robo9]]

Any better at all? Original left for reference.

[Ego]

Its the eyes that make the sprite and ref look different. Although yes, you did improve the snout.

[[robo9]]

Any better at all?

[Vipershark]

edit- round off the back of the eye more.
Aside from that, the palette on the head is purple, when it should be dark bluish.

[[robo9]]

Any better?

And I purposely made the dark blue into a purple.

[Vipershark]

No.
Here, I made an edit.


Fixed the eyes, and moved the pupils closer to the middle to give his eyes that "blank" look.

The eyes are the correct shape now, but I can't get him to look angry with the available space. I need maybe one more pixel between his eyes and the sheet of paper to make him actually have angry-looking eyebrows.

[Sengir]

Here's an edit:

[[robo9]]

I think I relied on Sengir's a biit to much :/

[Vipershark]

Don't forget to move the pupils to the middle of his eyes. They always have a "blank stare" look in pearls before swine.

[[robo9]]

Well Im only going to have the blank stare during his triumphant pose, shown in his ref. The current pose shows him trying to actually concentrate.

[Vipershark]

wait, is this for mugen?

[[robo9]]

No, but something to help me learn MMFD.

Since I'm having trouble coding a fighting game I thought going back to codingplatfotmers and beat em ups would help me learn.

Mostly since the coding I tried for the fighting engine didn work

[Baegal]

his hat on your sprite says "PBJ", when the ref says "PJB"

:/