And now, for something completely different

[Gold]

Gosh darned it. Every time I see this thread I think somebody sprited some Monty Python.

On topic: I can't tell at all what is goign on with her face

[Gors]

is this better?

[Vipershark]

miku hatsune
the hair on the right (her left) needs a bit more shading though.

[Ninspriterx]

You should also try a more traditional (to the original) face.
I can picture it easily being pulled off nicely. But if you want to keep it in your own style that's perfectly fine.

[Gors]

Thanks for the comments. I'll shade her hair a bit more soon.

@ Ninspriterx: What do you mean by 'more traditional'?

[Baegal]

I think he means that her face looks 'too real' (atleast that's what I think). I actually think she needs to look more anime-ish.

[Cshad]

Her face is kind of fat

[Sulfur]

I like the Miku a lot, the outline especially. It might look even better with more contrast in the shades.

[Vipershark]

actually, now that I look at it again, NinX is right.
You pretty much nailed her hair and body (aside from the minor shading issue from earlier) but the face doesn't really look like her.

[Gors]

how about this? *possibly the last update*

[Tea]

better face, but i really don't like the bottom of the skirt.

[Gors]

[Phantom Killah]

that looks really good

[Helmo]

It looks too much like sand, that's supposed to be water right? Make it... curve a bit more at the top?

[Gors]

I don't know, I was trying to do a calm water, so I thought it didn't need pointier waves (if that's what you mean).

does this look good?



Edited some waves and added Tessie for fun :o