Not bad, in fact I like it. The stomach seems a tad pillowed though unless that's me.

Welcome to TSR, if you hadn't already introduced yourself.

(09-10-2010, 01:45 PM)masterofdioga Wrote: Not bad, in fact I like it. The stomach seems a tad pillowed though unless that's me.

Welcome to TSR, if you hadn't already introduced yourself.

I must do Updates. Thanks MasterOfDioga.

I don't like the way you shaded his stomach, but, I do enjoy the design aesthetic. It reminds me of the sort of thing you'd see in an American/European designed eastern fantasy comic.

(09-17-2010, 11:59 AM)nino Wrote:

I can't quite tell whether or not this is supposed to be a woman, to be honest.

unless you're aiming for a guy with a feminist approach, I recommend getting rid of the six pack. It's your call though.

masterofdioga, wtf? How can you think it's a guy just because it has a 6pack? Muscular women do exist. :/

(09-17-2010, 04:20 PM)Shoda Wrote: masterofdioga, wtf? How can you think it's a guy just because it has a 6pack? Muscular women do exist. :/

They'd have bigger arms and bigger legs with a six pack as shown.

and with abs like those, i can asure you they'd need a less femenine and more masculine appearance.

(09-17-2010, 04:20 PM)Shoda Wrote: masterofdioga, wtf? How can you think it's a guy just because it has a 6pack? Muscular women do exist. :/

let me ask you this, how often do you see a woman with a six pack and still have slim arms and legs.

all and all it seems not only un-natural, but odd.

It's a problem with the definition, not that she's defined.

the muscles are so extremely defined they do look drawn on her, and basically on everyone else.

These guys are basically recolors.

palette swaps of the same character with minor added details, yes.