i don't plan to submit this but i'm trying my hand at spriting for the first time and i figured i can get an honest opinion from u guys. Here's the sprite It was edited from Piccolo that Dazz ripped. Again, not for submission, just for critique.

First off, make sure you have read this.

Also, edits are not generally welcome here.

As I haven't seen the origional I think its pretty good, the arms look a tad odd though

yea Tea i read that like right after i posted it, that was my fault and i understand ur policy on edits but i'm not going to submit it at all, i just need some criticism so that i'll know what to do for when i try it from scratch.

and thanx sooty but could u be more specific about the arms? is it the shading?

Make sure to reread rule 10:

Quote:Please use these sites:

http://www.Photobucket.com
http://www.Imageshack.us
http://www.Pixeljoint.com
http://www.Tinypic.com
http://www.majhost.com
http://www.imagehost.org
(If you have any other sites, post them here) I personally prefer Photobucket.com

Anyway, I can't tell this is an edit, so I suppose that's a good thing.

yeah, it's different enough to be considered as another new sprite

But I don't like his clothes; it's basically a huge black blot.

That's your first attempt at a sprite? It's better than the crap I did..Good job.

(08-02-2010, 01:40 PM)Karadom Wrote: That's your first attempt at a sprite? It's better than the crap I did..

It's against the rules to fish for compliments when you're posting a sprite but
I think I'll start enforcing this rule for replies to a thread too, it's fucking annoying

for a first sprite, this actually isn't too bad. lord knows my first attempts weren't too much better. i guess the only thing i can really say is try and learn more about colors and save your images as pngs. have more contrast, hue-shift a bit more, experiment.

Thought i'd try reposting with the image hosting site since i didnt read the rules b4



and thanx for all the advice guys

Now it's a jpeg. Upload it using photobucket.

do not upload sprite edits to deviantART.

photobucket it is, and i just learned not to upload sprite edits there, they just scrapped it.



btw another edit i did, this time it's Din from Oracle of Seasons

What's Din edited from?

Anna, Jump Ultimate Stars ripped by Dazz