Noëlle- character development

[Maxpphire]

Ok I understand that her arm tilting back her hat is a bit fucked and something seems off about her nose. My style seems to have gone less animeish and a bit more... different rather recently. Whoo for that at least~

http://img242.imageshack.us/img242/1323/scanb.jpg

Linked out cause my scanner doesn't like to work correctly so it made it huge. Anyway I could make it better?

[Alpha Six]

Nose is dudelike, eyes are HUUUUUGE and yeah that arm's fucked

[JarJar]

Get rid of the anime-like eyes, if youre not gonna do it anime style then theres no use of them.

[lone wolf-rayet star]

Her nose is way too big and manly.