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[pixelart comic] 56k warning
Gnarizard Offline
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#1
12-27-2008, 10:09 AM (This post was last modified: 12-27-2008, 12:35 PM by Gnarizard.)
Welcome to my comic thread!

No proper website or anything for this yet, but linking to another forum where I posted it would be kinda weird, so with some help from Dazz I managed to make this post transportable to TSR's forums.

Been working on this for 3 weeks or so, pretty satisfied with what I have so far; just need to come up with a name for it already. Cry

Hope you enjoy the read if you decide to read it;


[latest page: page 65]
[spoiler][Image: Burk_65_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]


For those confused about the format:

there's 1 world where 3 stories take place.

[Image: hero-pic.png]
Noah's story.
Burk's story.
And Tobi's story.

In essence I'll be running 3 comics in the same style within the same world.

DA Comic Gallery
http://neoriceisgood.deviantart.com/gall...mic-series



Tobi: 22 pages
Noah: 22 pages
Burk: 21 pages


Comic

Burk Chapter 1 [1 to 5]
[spoiler]
Comic 1
[Image: Burk_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 2
[Image: Burk_2_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 3
[Image: Burk_3_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 4
[Image: comicburk14mp8.png]
Comic 5
[Image: Burk_5_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
Burk Chapter 1 [6 to 10]
[spoiler]
Comic 6
[Image: Burk_6_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 7
[Image: Burk_7_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 8
[Image: Burk_8_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 9
[Image: Burk_9_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 10
[Image: Burk_10_by_Neoriceisgood.png][/spoiler]
Noah Chapter 2 [11 till 15]
[spoiler]
Comic 11
[Image: Noah_1_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 12
[Image: Noah_12_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 13
[Image: Noah_13_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 14
[Image: Noah_14_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 15
[Image: Noah_15_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
Noah Chapter 2 [16 till 20]
[spoiler]
Comic 16
[Image: Noah_16_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 17
[Image: Noah_17_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 18
[Image: Noah_18_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 19
[Image: Noah_19_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 20
[Image: Noah_20_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
Tobi Chapter 3 [21 till 25]
[spoiler]
Comic 21
[Image: Tobi_21_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 22
[Image: Tobi_22_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 23
[Image: Tobi_23_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 24
[Image: Tobi_24_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 25
[Image: Tobi_25_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
Tobi Chapter 3 [26 till 30]
[spoiler]
Comic 26
[Image: Tobi_26_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 27
[Image: Tobi_27_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 28
[Image: Tobi_28_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 29
[Image: Tobi_29_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Comic 30
[Image: Tobi_30_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]


Chapter 4

Page 31-35
[spoiler]
Burk: Page 31
[Image: Burk_31_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 32
[Image: Burk_32_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 33[b]
[Image: Noah_33_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[b]Tobi: Page 34
[Image: Tobi_34_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 35
[Image: Burk_35_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
Page 36-40
[spoiler]
Tobi: Page 36
[Image: Tobi_36_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 37
[Image: Tobi_37_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 38
[Image: Tobi_38_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 39
[Image: Noah_39_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 40
[Image: Tobi_40_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]

Page 41-45
[spoiler]
Noah: Page 41
[Image: Noah_41_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 42
[Image: Burk_42_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 43
[Image: Noah_43_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 44
[Image: Noah_44_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 45
[Image: Burk_45_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]

Page 46-50
[spoiler]
Tobi: Page 46
[Image: Tobi_46_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 47
[Image: Tobi_47_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 48
[Image: Burk_48_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 49
[Image: Burk_49_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 50
[Image: Noah_50_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]

Page 51-55
[spoiler]
Noah: Page 51
[Image: Noah_51_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 52
[Image: Tobi_52_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 53
[Image: Burk_53_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 54
[Image: Noah_54_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 55
[Image: Tobi_55_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]

Page 56-60
[spoiler]
Burk: Page 56
[Image: Burk_56_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 57
[Image: Noah_57_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 58
[Image: Noah_58_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 59
[Image: Noah_59_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Noah: Page 60
[Image: Noah_60_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]

Page 61-65
[spoiler]
Tobi: Page 61
[Image: Tobi_61_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 62
[Image: Tobi_62_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Tobi: Page 63
[Image: Tobi_63_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 64
[Image: Burk_64_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
Burk: Page 65
[Image: Burk_65_by_Neoriceisgood.png]
[/spoiler]
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Zee Offline
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#2
12-27-2008, 10:46 AM
Yeah, yanno what? It'd probably be a good idea to just link to the images, as they're about 2 megs apiece. Just a suggestion. Not terrible, but didn't capture my interest either. Just, not my style.
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#3
12-27-2008, 11:19 AM
I think its so fucking awesome, but yeah i agree with Zee. You should just post links instead of spoilers.
How about this name:

Heroes of the Subworld: Unboern legends.
(Damn that took me ages to think off xP)
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Gnarizard Offline
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#4
12-27-2008, 11:29 AM
There's a link in there which leads to a seperate subfolder in my DA that has all seperate comic pages, I kind of figured that functioned as a way to view the seperate comic images fairly well.
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#5
12-27-2008, 12:13 PM
I like it, although I skipped some bits because it was too lengthy.
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Zee Offline
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#6
12-27-2008, 12:14 PM
Right, but the spoilers still try to download the images to the page, which makes it takes a long time on slower connections, a really long time. So, I dunno, switch to links, or at least be nice to the (rare few) 56k-ers and give em a warning in the title or something. I think you're capable of figuring something out.
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Gnarizard Offline
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#7
12-27-2008, 12:35 PM
Whoops, I'm sorry.

My computer's so epic that I didn't notice Smile
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Adam Offline
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#8
12-27-2008, 02:13 PM
Just like I said on DA, they're really rad
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#9
12-29-2008, 04:09 PM
I didn't really "read" the comic per se, but I'm amazed that SOMEONE finally decided to match sprite styles in their sprite comics. It looks good and all matches together wonderfully.
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#10
12-29-2008, 05:20 PM
I like your sprite style however your brand of wit isn't my cup of tea. It isn't bad however.
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#11
12-30-2008, 02:22 AM
I just read the entire thing and it's amazing so far.
All 3 stories drew me in like a good book.
Please, continue!
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#12
12-31-2008, 04:30 PM
Saw this a while ago on your DA, awesome stuff.
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#13
12-31-2008, 09:11 PM
http://fc74.deviantart.com/fs38/f/2008/3...isgood.png

Honest question, does that girl have a penis hand?
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#14
12-31-2008, 09:51 PM
please host somewhere other than deviantart for the benefit of everyone without a t3 server
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