Ash's Animations

[-Ash-]

Decided to start a thread for animations specifically, I normally would rarely do them but I decided to try today and whipped up this yawning girl thing. Any feedback is welcomed.

[Paladin]

I really like the animation itself, it's got plenty of personality, and the only thing odd is how the girl's stomach kinda changes shape during it. I can see what you were going for, but the change is a bit sudden. I also don't really think the broken selout is doing the sprites any favors, so cleaning it up would probably make the sprite look more appealing.

Overall, I like the colourful style you've got, keep it up!

[-Ash-]

I really like the animation itself, it's got plenty of personality, and the only thing odd is how the girl's stomach kinda changes shape during it. I can see what you were going for, but the change is a bit sudden. I also don't really think the broken selout is doing the sprites any favors, so cleaning it up would probably make the sprite look more appealing.

Overall, I like the colourful style you've got, keep it up!

I actually just finished a slightly better version trying to clean up some stuff and make it just feel smoother.

[Gors]