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Rapture! The Game. A new sidescroller coming soon.

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Rapture! The Game. A new sidescroller coming soon.
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#31
12-06-2012, 07:59 AM
the skeleton on the top-right corner is almost invisible, save for the skull. I suggest making it readable against any background.
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#32
12-06-2012, 10:42 AM
Yeah, I agree. I think just giving him a brighter outline would do the trick, since I don't think he'll be against such a dark background that often.

Also, why the flat RaptureBoy? The first one you showed was pretty good imo.
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#33
12-06-2012, 06:35 PM
Looking nice!

One thing I'd recommend though is smoothing the edges of the Fauxboy; I notice some 'jaggies' appear on what imo should be relatively flat lines. This is most noticeable on the top.
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