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12-16-2012, 04:54 PM
(This post was last modified: 12-16-2012, 04:56 PM by Leveller.)
Well I made an account here only to vanish into obscurity. So here's some stuff I've put together after not producing any work for a few months.
![[Image: demosprite3.png]](http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y307/chrismander/demosprite3.png)
Little Wizard Guy - A character design I came up with for a platformer.
![[Image: demonrider.png]](http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y307/chrismander/demonrider.png)
Unfinished line art.
![[Image: vegsd.png]](http://i1024.photobucket.com/albums/y307/chrismander/vegsd.png)
Vegeta SD.
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Vegeta appears jagged in some areas (notably the chin), and the wizard could use some contrast, as some of the colors mix in with each other.
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Admittedly, I rushed to get Vegeta done. I have a tendency to cut a few corners that can leave obvious flaws in my work. Thanks for the heads up though!
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The wizard looks fine there are some black dots that you could remove(under ear and on top of hat)
Vegeta
-Maybe more color depth
-needs muscles, I know you said you rushed through it but you can always go back and make it better
![[Image: editvegeta.png]](http://img827.imageshack.us/img827/3998/editvegeta.png)
Might want to add muscle to the legs also
Just spend more time on it, doesn't need to be finished in one setting.
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Thanks for the advice, just for clarity's sake can I have a singular thread for posting new art? Opposed to spamming new threads here and there with halfhearted works.
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you can continue uploading your works in this thread, yes. in fact its better not to create a lot of threads.