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03-29-2012, 07:17 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-29-2012, 07:18 PM by optimuskirby.)
if i continue to work on something like this:
![[Image: testtoon.png]](http://i1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh505/optimuskirby1/SPRITES/testtoon.png)
is there a slight possibility that you might upload it maybe? i know dark link doesn't have waves, but i have a waveless version
i think i've improved on my spriting a bit from these:
![[Image: spritelineup.png]](http://i1249.photobucket.com/albums/hh505/optimuskirby1/SPRITES/spritelineup.png)
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03-29-2012, 07:23 PM
(This post was last modified: 03-29-2012, 07:24 PM by Shade.)
I would guess no, there's still too many problems.
Just stick to the spriting and pixelart section and get some critique on those and make some improvements.
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Moved to S&PA. Just keep trying. You'll get better, trust me.
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ok, what are obvious problems b-sides shading?
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poor concept, linework being bland, poor choice of colors. there is basically nothing remarkable about this, even when the goal isnt anywhere near making a fine piece of art, there is basically nothing particulary relevant about it.
