The Troops Legacy (Writing)

[Maxpphire]

Tachikoma@ Not really being helpful, seeing how I wouldn't write this if I didn't read books

Actually she has a point. If you look at any written book, they did not make any such mistakes so it is only natural to think that you haven't looked at a decent amount of books to be making such silly mistakes.

[supersmashbrawl]

Probably cause I've been reading Manga, and science books alot

[Gors]

which are totally different types of text, thus you shouldn't use them as the only basis in your narration.