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Custom DDD Sprite
pauzle Offline
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#1
06-30-2008, 10:53 AM
[Image: bannerr-5.png]

<_< It's my first try at spriting so yea, it looks kinda bad IMO. I heard that it looked "blocky looking", so if anyone could give C+C, tell me how to make it look better, ect, that would be good. Big Grin

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06-30-2008, 10:55 AM (This post was last modified: 06-30-2008, 11:23 AM by Rakia.)
Straighten out the line art, because it's not smooth at all, that's where the blocky looking comes from.
Also, the shading needs some work. I couldn't tell if there was any at first.
Add a little contrast to the work (Where has wavey gone? D=)
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06-30-2008, 11:03 AM
Agree, the shading is off a bit. Fix it.
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06-30-2008, 02:33 PM
[Image: bannernude-1.png]

I added SOME stuff in..(You prolly can't even figure out what I changed..).but I don't really know how/what to fix after this. Tongue

Add a little contrast to the work (Where has wavey gone? D=) = I dunno what that means <_<.
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#5
07-01-2008, 03:05 AM
Well, contrast is when the shades of colors are easier to tell apart. Like, make the lighter red on the sleeves a bit lighter then it is, for example. As for wavy, I guess like folds in the coat, but I'm not sure myself...
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