Cartoon Styled Sonic in MSPAINT

[Blazefirelp]

So People have been speculating that I can't draw any form of Sonic " BY hand " using only my mouse in MSPAINT

Did I proove them wrong?

C+C please

[Baegal]

pillowshaded. Plus there are too many shades for the muzzle

[Zeeste]

Did I proove them wrong?

no

[Blazefirelp]

Did I proove them wrong?

no

*Looks at you're rep

[Alpha Six]

Did I proove them wrong?

no

Way to be a prick. Warned.

The colored lineart looks alright (except the head is really squished), but the shaded version needs to be completely redone.

Also, this isn't a sprite, so moving.

[GrooveMan.exe]

*Looks at you're rep

Yours isn't significantly better.

And yeah, that does look pretty squashed and off-model, not to mention that the shading is heavily pillowed. have a look at some existing art for Sonic, and try to follow the proportions more closely.

[Blazefirelp]

I looked at a reference for Sonic on SonicArtArchive Which I looked at. But I like to give things my own feel to them rather than blatent copying and how the fuck is my rep worse that his? Atlest I'm not a imature cunt like him. + I aint posted much at all here.

[Vipershark]

The main problem is that he has no head. It's literally face and then spines, and no head in between.

All sonic characters heads are circles. Start out by drawing a circle, then add the details to it.

[Ultimecia]

The basic to draw anything is use geometric shapes as a start, and them work on it. To make heads, it's common to use a circle and then add the jaw, use a cross-like line to put the eyes, nose and mouth in the right place and there you go. Looks like your Sonic got no skull or, at very best, a went through a procedure to remove bone cancer (not a pretty thing).

If you feel too lazy to redo the drawing, you can try moving the spikes a bit away from his face and work on it. Also the shading feels really odd. Not only pillowed, but the colors you picked make him looks...Dunno, plastic.

And I think that's all :p

[Vipershark]

the face itself is actually not bad
redraw the head, and then copy/paste the face onto it and fix it up to fit the new head and it should be fine

[Cobalt Blue]

it looks way better without any shading at all.

[Blazefirelp]

Thanks for all the criticism peoples. Very much appriciated and I will have a go at that sometime later and I'll post it here to see if I made him look like Sonic or something that should be at "Maddam two swords"

[Blazefirelp]

Any improovments?

[Gors]

he still lacks a skull.

[Ultimecia]

Totally agree with Gorsal. C'mon, do a circle with the circle tool and use it as base ;p