03-04-2009, 02:23 PM
This is working MUCH better than before.
The text was a little hard to see in this one, but it was because of it being on top of a white part of the background, not because of the opacity persay. The scripting is much nicer now, though I think Alucard was still a little too blatant about what he thinks.
Coming along much nicer. Though I'm still a little confused as to whether this is a comedy or a serious comic. Seems that with the topic, it should be more serious, but Soma is making it a little more comedic than expected.
Keep up the good work.
The text was a little hard to see in this one, but it was because of it being on top of a white part of the background, not because of the opacity persay. The scripting is much nicer now, though I think Alucard was still a little too blatant about what he thinks.
Coming along much nicer. Though I'm still a little confused as to whether this is a comedy or a serious comic. Seems that with the topic, it should be more serious, but Soma is making it a little more comedic than expected.
Keep up the good work.