Super Star Ultra Project - Phase 2

[Jermungandr]

I think I figured out what's been bothering me about Sword Matter's cape. It's the way the illuminated part of it tends to rub right up against the shaded part. It needs at least a thin sampling of the neutral line between them to give it more of a smooth transition.



Also I think the color you're using under his cape at the moment is a tad too dark. I have to look really closely to even make out his shape against it. Try something more like this:



Finally, while I don't mind you using the sword from my old sheet, I honestly think you could do a lot better job if you tried.