(01-28-2009, 09:15 PM)AgentLym Wrote: Hm... Torkirby, you may be right.Yo, Baegal, are you making Ado or Adeline? (Ado has no arms, like yours; Adeline has arms.
) Arms won't be that hard to fix, though.
And, A.J. Nitro, looks good!Just his arms look a little like they are being stretched out in the back... But, actually, I think that's just the way the shadow of the arm connects with the black line of the back.
Im doing adeline. I'll fix the arms
@torkirby, i dont know what to do about the eyes... I tried other things, but...

(01-29-2009, 10:52 AM)ville10 Wrote: Guess I should help others by giving criticism too...
@Drshnaps: Both look very good, keep up the good work!
@Simona-King: Good, but he could be fatter, and the light bulb could be better shaped. Is also need to brighter, as if it was shining.
@A.J. Nitro: Shouldn't Big Waddle Dee be bigger, compared to the original sprite, he looks too small. Otherwise it's good.
@Zachattack888: Chip should probably be a bit pointier and he looks a bit small. You also need to move the eyes up a bit.
@Baegal: The eyes look really boring, check Kirby's sprite, the eyes are never just a straight line. The foots also seems to be pointing in the wrong direction compared to the rest of the body.
@Torkirby: Looks good so far, but I think you should remove the gray pixles below the hat and next to the eyes.
@Batandy: The eye needs to be rounder, and it also seems oddly colored. Check the Kirby's Dream Land 3 sprite for a reference. The yellow part could also use some more shading.
Also, shouldn't the rainbow sword be rainbow colored?
What do you mean by the foots are pointing the wrong way? I also tried with the kirby eyes, but it looked messed up... I'll try again...
And, is the shading okay?



Yo, Baegal, are you making Ado or Adeline? (Ado has no arms, like yours; Adeline has arms.
) Arms won't be that hard to fix, though. 
Just his arms look a little like they are being stretched out in the back... But, actually, I think that's just the way the shadow of the arm connects with the black line of the back.