01-28-2009, 05:04 PM
Patience, chromeclawz :p
The background's not very interesting, and the AA not that well done either (you know what AAing is, it's just badly spread).
The black foreground/light background idea is interesting, but it's execution isn't. Maybe try and hint more shapes or give more movement to the black, and add more variety to the background... you should get good results.
The background's not very interesting, and the AA not that well done either (you know what AAing is, it's just badly spread).
The black foreground/light background idea is interesting, but it's execution isn't. Maybe try and hint more shapes or give more movement to the black, and add more variety to the background... you should get good results.