05-15-2016, 10:03 AM
One last thing I can see on Lantern Ghost is...
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This line weight stuff going on here is bugging me quite a bit -- the line for his shoulder thins right as it gets to another thick line, not only causing this weird tiny "point" to occur (at the base of the line going straight up), but also kinda throws things off because the contrast of going that thin to that thick is a little jarring. I'd thicken up the area of his shoulder just a tad.
This line weight stuff going on here is bugging me quite a bit -- the line for his shoulder thins right as it gets to another thick line, not only causing this weird tiny "point" to occur (at the base of the line going straight up), but also kinda throws things off because the contrast of going that thin to that thick is a little jarring. I'd thicken up the area of his shoulder just a tad.