04-17-2014, 06:02 PM
Hah, that animation is cute.
I'd suggest not making the arms metal, or at least making them a very different type of color metal ("tan gray" as opposed to "blue gray," for example) so that they stand out more against the body.
The mask is pretty hard to read. Put your face a comfortable distance from the monitor (the internet says 18-30 inches) and pretend like you didn't know what your own intentions were. I know that's difficult, but...
the colors and shapes just meld together way too much unless you put your face up against the screen.
I'd suggest not making the arms metal, or at least making them a very different type of color metal ("tan gray" as opposed to "blue gray," for example) so that they stand out more against the body.
The mask is pretty hard to read. Put your face a comfortable distance from the monitor (the internet says 18-30 inches) and pretend like you didn't know what your own intentions were. I know that's difficult, but...
the colors and shapes just meld together way too much unless you put your face up against the screen.