12-10-2013, 01:54 PM
Since you want C+C on the first two sprites, I'll spend my time criticizing the second piece (which is bigger and thus, more showing of your capabilities.
![[Image: LIjz4us.png]](http://i.imgur.com/LIjz4us.png)
i am not familiar with the character, but its snout seems kinda 'flat' at the side, usually snouts project outward quite noticeably so you should do that instead of treating it as a flat surface with a nose in the middle
there are a bunch of jaggies on the tail and foot, shading and its left arm looks weird
you can also find some lone pixels which are distracting, remove them in order to optimize it
the feather on top of its head also seems misplaced or pending to one side, idk if you wanted to place it in the middle of his forehead or something
i am not familiar with the character, but its snout seems kinda 'flat' at the side, usually snouts project outward quite noticeably so you should do that instead of treating it as a flat surface with a nose in the middle
there are a bunch of jaggies on the tail and foot, shading and its left arm looks weird
you can also find some lone pixels which are distracting, remove them in order to optimize it
the feather on top of its head also seems misplaced or pending to one side, idk if you wanted to place it in the middle of his forehead or something