10-08-2013, 07:59 PM
you may claim to not "have that much heart" but it doesn't change how its a fairly glaring issue in your work.
and its already been mentioned but it seems you've ignored it, the grass looks really bad and seems to be shaded based on how close it is to the ground rather than whether or not light would reach it..
I also figured you were going to work more on the rocks but as you haven't I might as well mention that their dark red tone seems really out of place, the rock on the left is a really strange shape, the middle rock has useless lines all over it and the rock on the right looks like its the crusts from an overcooked pie.
You also have a few inconsistent tones in your sky.
And if you insist on not changing the city scape, I should at least ask why the faces of the buildings are shaded to look curved?
and its already been mentioned but it seems you've ignored it, the grass looks really bad and seems to be shaded based on how close it is to the ground rather than whether or not light would reach it..
I also figured you were going to work more on the rocks but as you haven't I might as well mention that their dark red tone seems really out of place, the rock on the left is a really strange shape, the middle rock has useless lines all over it and the rock on the right looks like its the crusts from an overcooked pie.
You also have a few inconsistent tones in your sky.
And if you insist on not changing the city scape, I should at least ask why the faces of the buildings are shaded to look curved?