Super Mario Cards Project

[Koopaul]

Nice, katakana below the sprite... only... you made a lot of mistakes. You forgot to add dakuten (the '') in Kuribo (Goomba) and Patakuribo (Paragoomba). Also, your 'ta' is wrong. It should have a horizontal slash inside the three slashes. The 'pa' in Patapata (Paratroopa) is lacking a han dakuten (the °) and your 'ge' in Jugemu (Lakitu) looks like a 'gu'. The 'pu' in Choropuu (Monty Mole) looks like a 'bu' because it looks like a dakuten. You wrote Gesso (Blooper) as "Gu'nn" because your 'ge' looks like 'gu' (said before) and 'so' looks like a 'n'. Also, you could make the sokuon (small tsu) smaller.

Yeah, I realize that now. The problem is that the text is so small. I made the katakana text myself, and tried to keep it within size limits, so I'm sure there are mistakes perhaps you can help me edit them?

@ARefractedSwindler

For the future, PM someone to ask them for something. Don't do it in a topic.



Anyway...




As you can see I'm taking my time. Christmas is slowing me down. But I'd like to know what you think of the Koopas?