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Novally's Sprite Thread (C+C needed!)*
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Newly added! Feb 13th, 2013

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The right leg is bothering me like crazy!

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SLIGHT update.

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Going to work off Virtuaboy123's edit. I've edited his edit. Fixing some minor things I thought would bring out more of the sprite.
I'll be working on a small sheet of this now. Will try to make a 4 frame running animation.

Update:

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Mario, I made this from that edit of Mario360's sprite. I worked on it so much that there is barely a resemblance.

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I don't intend on making a sheet of this. If I do it will be pretty small.

Boo Scratch Sprites!

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Finished!

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I wont even bother to submit these to the site. Doesn't look good enough. I could have done better than this.

OLVery Sad

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Animation fail. The animation is going too slow. I fixed all the sprites to this animation already. Just putting it up here for show.

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I did start on this animation because I got bored waiting for comments. I fixed it up the best I can but I most likely will scrap it because It's lazily done.

Here is the update. Again C+C needed.

I took note of everyone's comments. I fixed most of the selective outlining problems, I made sure the eyes and the mouth are centered evenly. I even remove the pointless shade of red in the mouth of Boo and replaced it with black.


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I might dither.

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Which version is Better?

I chose the rounder one..

C+C needed.

My issues are that there is some selective outline fails I overlooked.

I've always wanted to have my work on the archive since I was a beginner. I will start with this. Please help me improve this sprite. Once it's at it's highest quality I will make a sheet and submit it.[/spoiler]



Random Sprites of Me.

[Spoiler]My character sprite(s). The Capcom vs SNK 2 sprite will be put on hold. I have to attend to a few commissions and Fiverr gigs before I can get back to this.

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Some chibi sprites, C+C please. I kind of hate how I made the shirt so tight.


Edit/Update:
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I am still cleaning up the pixels.


Alright guys. Before I show you these. I must ask for no C+C on these two drawings. I don't care about them as a drawing at all really. It's not that I don't like C+C, it's just these were pretty much rushed down to get used as a base. It's like giving critique to a blank canvas. These will be turned into sprites, Capcom vs SNK style. So I'll need to C+C to begin as soon as move towards the actual spriting part.

Image One:
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The things wrong with this is:

-That his shirt looks stiff. As soon as I work on this the shirt will look much softer and I have all the great artists on here to guide me through the way.

- He has no hands, this is because I suck at drawing hands, so I am going to either take pre-drawn hands or work on the hands when I'm at the line art portion (which is most-likely to happen).

- One leg is shorter than the other, again I will fix this when I'm on the line art portion.



Image Two:
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- that sad mouth Sad[/spoiler]



Mage Sprite Commission

[spoiler]I was hired to make sprites for a game. He's not paying me for what I'm worth. This is a sprite I made him. C+C would be nice, but the sprite wont be modified since the guy wants it just like this.

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Update: I had quit due to his pretentious nature and his low pay.




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I was being paid $10 (that sprite sheet isn't even done yet I mind you!) for 30 x 30 sprites including Idle stance, attack, death, walking, and hurt animation. I also had to create a magic projectile for the mage. I would have normally charged a little less than $40 for this, but that would be too expensive for the guy. I didn't mind charging only $10 per sprite sheet but he would constantly bother me over minor issues. Issues that weren't even mistakes but issues of preference. I hate that kind of stuff.[/spoiler]



Pets from various anime:
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Super Mario World Items:
[spoiler]V1:
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V2:
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V3:
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Edit: Thank you everyone for helping me improve![/spoiler]

2013 is going to be the year I improve my sprite work and I will start here.

I made these sprites from scratch.


Messages In This Thread
Novally's Sprite Thread (C+C needed!)* - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 01:40 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-29-2013, 01:57 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 02:07 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:16 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 04:19 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:37 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 04:46 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Previous - 01-29-2013, 04:54 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 05:02 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-29-2013, 05:16 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Sevenstitch - 01-29-2013, 08:56 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Mr. Jam - 01-29-2013, 10:22 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 03:22 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by RnR - 01-29-2013, 03:24 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-29-2013, 03:31 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Mr. Jam - 01-29-2013, 04:17 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 01:30 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Hoeloe - 01-30-2013, 03:37 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 03:39 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by ~Axis~ - 01-30-2013, 04:44 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-30-2013, 01:44 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 03:17 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Shade - 01-31-2013, 11:20 AM
RE: Critique these items please - by Gors - 01-31-2013, 12:44 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Vipershark - 01-31-2013, 02:29 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 03:10 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Vipershark - 01-31-2013, 06:40 PM
RE: Critique these items please - by Novally - 01-31-2013, 09:34 PM

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