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oh shit man those suck
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Too early for critique, but to me, the guy in the middle's right arm (our left) looks too short compared to the left (our right) arm, and the left arm's elbow looks too far up. And the gun is in an awkward position. It looks as if he's holding the trigger with his middle finger (unless that was intentional :\)

And the center point of the third guy's hair shouldn't be so far to his left (our right). It needs to be just above the break of the moustache, about above where the nose is.

other than that, these are pretty rad. Finish plz


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oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-25-2008, 09:19 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Chdonga - 11-25-2008, 09:42 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Adam - 11-25-2008, 09:57 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Rosencrantz - 11-25-2008, 10:09 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-25-2008, 10:18 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by mozzy - 11-25-2008, 10:27 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-26-2008, 11:20 AM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Lucas Olivarde - 11-26-2008, 11:58 AM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Alpha Six - 11-26-2008, 11:59 AM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-26-2008, 12:17 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-26-2008, 05:52 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Owlthief - 11-26-2008, 06:08 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Alpha Six - 11-26-2008, 06:18 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-26-2008, 06:19 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-27-2008, 04:12 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Alpha Six - 11-27-2008, 04:20 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-27-2008, 10:33 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by FRET - 11-27-2008, 10:36 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 11-27-2008, 11:20 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by triptych - 12-11-2008, 06:29 AM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Dazz - 12-11-2008, 06:33 AM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by Jesse - 12-11-2008, 10:09 PM
RE: oh shit man those suck - by -Dark- - 12-12-2008, 11:28 PM

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