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Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism)

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11-27-2012, 03:03 AM

I think the far leg extends too far. Also, I'd suggest you not to band the outlines with another darker shade as it makes them look somewhat blurry.

Just a quick edit of a few parts to illustrate what I mean, but it applies to the whole sprite:

[Image: R5icW.png]

[Image: R5icW.png]

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Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Mandew - 11-18-2012, 05:55 PM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by recme - 11-18-2012, 07:48 PM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by Gors - 11-20-2012, 01:03 PM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by Cobalt Blue - 11-20-2012, 06:49 PM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by Marth - 11-20-2012, 07:32 PM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by Mandew - 11-21-2012, 10:39 AM

RE: JUS-ish Customs (Original Characters) - by Proton - 11-24-2012, 09:54 PM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Hoeloe - 11-25-2012, 04:41 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Proton - 11-25-2012, 11:56 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Gors - 11-25-2012, 08:46 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Cobalt Blue - 11-25-2012, 09:57 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Doc Melonhead - 11-25-2012, 12:40 PM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Mandew - 11-26-2012, 10:53 PM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Previous - 11-27-2012, 03:03 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Gors - 11-27-2012, 06:51 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Mandew - 11-27-2012, 07:41 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Gors - 11-27-2012, 07:55 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Garamonde - 11-27-2012, 10:57 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Vipershark - 11-28-2012, 03:58 AM

RE: Mandew's sprites (needs constructive criticism) - by Candel - 11-28-2012, 05:40 PM

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