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Geno Mario and Luigi Bowser's Inside Story (Battle)
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Well, crap.
I was just about to pm you, Ton, about unlocking this. He sent me a pm about this.
I should be like..an M&L Mod for these sort of things lol

LET'S BEGIN:
He looks a bit..flat. Especially around the part where he is wood. There is no definition to it and lacks proper shading. It's all blocky(heh..wood..blocky..)
Some of the poses are hard to read. I'd suggest making things more clean.
Also, Geno could be a bit bigger. That way, you can work on making the details show properly.

Animation wise..it's really not that bad. It needs work though. Too energetic for someone like Geno though. I don't like how the yellow symbol on his move is stationary, yet the back of it moves.
The legs bend so weird. It's like they're broken. I'd suggest taken more in mind of his joints.

I think..that's about it.


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RE: Geno Mario and Luigi Bowser's Inside Story (Battle) - by Star - 07-27-2012, 01:45 AM

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