07-17-2012, 08:55 PM
Even though these are mostly sketches, I'm looking for really specific advice on areas I could improve, but of course I'd also like to hear from y'all what I'm doing right.
and please be brutal and nitpicky if need be, the more you say the more I can work with (red lines and actual edits are appreciated!)
![[Image: your_ego_is_no_less_beautiful_by_desgardes-d57da4f.jpg]](http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/196/9/0/your_ego_is_no_less_beautiful_by_desgardes-d57da4f.jpg)
![[Image: tells__tastes__tries_by_desgardes-d57d954.jpg]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/196/e/4/tells__tastes__tries_by_desgardes-d57d954.jpg)
![[Image: outside_the_abstract_museum_with_squirre...51guju.png]](http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/148/6/c/outside_the_abstract_museum_with_squirrels_by_desgardes-d51guju.png)
![[Image: my_trip_to_the_moma__by_desgardes-d51gu6l.png]](http://th00.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2012/148/8/1/my_trip_to_the_moma__by_desgardes-d51gu6l.png)
![[Image: the_bird_queen_by_desgardes-d4rphzk.png]](http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/131/6/2/the_bird_queen_by_desgardes-d4rphzk.png)
![[Image: tumblr_lvqkrzgz2p1r0xhu8o1_500.jpg]](https://24.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_lvqkrzgz2p1r0xhu8o1_500.jpg)
![[Image: tumblr_m75y0uk0IZ1rspz8go4_250.gif]](https://25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m75y0uk0IZ1rspz8go4_250.gif)
and please be brutal and nitpicky if need be, the more you say the more I can work with (red lines and actual edits are appreciated!)