07-15-2012, 10:23 AM
You really need to increase contrast. A lot of your shades aren't distinguishable. It makes your shading hardly visible.
Then you have some banding issues. For example the left side of the last one's hair, you're following the outline with a line of shading - don't do that, it looks just weird and doesn't improve the linework at all.
Then you have some banding issues. For example the left side of the last one's hair, you're following the outline with a line of shading - don't do that, it looks just weird and doesn't improve the linework at all.