(11-10-2008, 04:26 PM)Tonberry2k Wrote: Well, I'm using M&L colors, but it's not strictly in that style. What looks jagged and what needs more shading? The beak?If it's not in M&L, I suggest not using the colors. M&L colors are too bright, and have really bad hues, and contrast. It looks to flat without more contrast. Also the shading in some areas is too cylindrical, meaning that it isn't shaded to how the texture of the object would be.
It looks jagged because there is no AA, or the shading doesn't have enough contrast. At this point the whole head needs work.