Custom character trying to gain his wings!

[Sevenstitch]

Everyone's suggestions and critique are entirely valid, and you should heed them.
To add to those, I would say that I don't really for the All-Red approach of the character.
That is a astetic choise though, not a design flaw. I think breaking the character up with
more color may help to define his features instead of him seeming to be a flying huminoid blob.