06-05-2012, 03:08 PM
(06-03-2012, 10:25 AM)The Pope of Dope Wrote: I tried, I honestly tried reading this and it's awful. I'm sorry, and to be honest calling it awful is a bit of an understatement. Are you writing a play, a game script or narrative? I don't think you understand writing in the slightest.
Thank you for your honest opinions. Today I'm going to edit this whole story so it's easier to understand. I'll present it as a drama script. Hopefully it will make more sense as a game or flash movie one day, but I'm far from that goal. Everyone please enjoy the edited version today and look forward to Chapter 2 in the next couple of days. Thank you. 