02-13-2012, 01:05 AM
Ah, okay. Well, the only advice I can give is that your fire seems... straightforward? I don't know what's a good word for it. You're separating the flames into simplistic "blades", the fire pokemon uses seems to be a bit more complex than that. The other thing is that your fire is mainly one shade with the dark shade mainly being used for outline, in Moltres' exmaple you can see how the dark/light shades have a (roughly?) equal distribution. Hopefully my attempt at conveying my thoughts makes sense to you!