01-20-2012, 12:32 PM
this is where you grow your artistic sense.
you need to understand why your work has flaws, even if your eyes don't think so. We gave a bunch of criticism already, it's your turn to understand it. We can't teach you how to understand, that's your part of improving as an artist.
as a start, I suggest doing something other than sword, since metallic objects have peculiar traits when shading. Go for something more simple, as fruits, or objects that are easily found at your home. This way, you can observe it and try applying them into your work.
you need to understand why your work has flaws, even if your eyes don't think so. We gave a bunch of criticism already, it's your turn to understand it. We can't teach you how to understand, that's your part of improving as an artist.
as a start, I suggest doing something other than sword, since metallic objects have peculiar traits when shading. Go for something more simple, as fruits, or objects that are easily found at your home. This way, you can observe it and try applying them into your work.