09-03-2011, 05:18 AM
the way you positioned the doorknob in the background makes it look like she's holding a gray something, I'd move her from there to avoid any misreadings
and this is more of a simple change but make the colored words match up with its meanings (mainly changing 'fever' to red and 'doctor' to a more neutral color) because I think it'll make much more sense this way.
and this is more of a simple change but make the colored words match up with its meanings (mainly changing 'fever' to red and 'doctor' to a more neutral color) because I think it'll make much more sense this way.